April 17

Writing

51 thoughts on “Writing

  1. keitha123

    Packing Up by Keith Ainsley

    On Friday I went to my nan’s house to pack. We packed up DVDS and there were like a thousand. My head was going to explode because it took for ever. Then we had a break but not for long. After our break we did more packing and it made me fall to the ground. When I got up I had a bump. We had to pack the towels.

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  2. lincolnh

    At Dads by Lincoln Haggie

    I went to my dads. I went to see the sheep, one was called Big Balls Tom Tom and the other sheep were called Jack Stinky and Sam.

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  3. arabellac12

    Arabella’s fun holiday.

    On Saturday night my cousin came to my house. We had fun we played dress ups. We got to wear our dresses to dinner. Our Dads took a long time to get dinner. While we waited we watched TV and had a tea party. We also jumped on my Mum and then our Dads finally came home. For dinner we got fish and chips. When I put some sauce on the piece of paper it was spicy hot like a red pepper.

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  4. loganj123

    My Cousin and I by Logan James

    My cousin stayed at my house. I had fish and chips then me, Brooklyn and Lockie had ice cream. Lockie had ice cream in a normal ice cream cone. Brooklyn and I had a waffle cone. We got more than Lockie. We slept in the lounge. My brother slept in the lounge. In the morning we woke up and watched TV. After lunch we played on the play station.

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  5. seant1234

    Fun Games by Sean Todd

    Last week mum and I went around to a friends house for a meeting but there was a problem. We were like the only ones there so we just played games instead. I played frisbee, table tennis and that game where you have a stick and a white ball and you have to hit the little balls into the holes. I won table tennis and it made me feel happy.

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  6. breap

    The Holidays 28.4.15 by Brea Peka

    In the holidays I went to the pools with my mum, my two sisters and my brother. It was cool when we went to the pools. We went to the college pools. I hopped in the big area and then my mum hopped in the big pool with my brother. Afterwards my brother and I went on the bouncy castle and we got pushed off the bouncy castle. We were going home so my brother and I did not go for a another swim.

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  7. arabellac12

    My Cousin by Arabella Coghlan

    On Saturday night my cousin came to my house. We had fun because we played dress ups. We got to wear our dresses to dinner. Our dads took a long time to get dinner. While we waited and watched tv and had a tea party. We also jumped on my mum and then our dads finally came home. For dinner we got fish and chips. When I put some sauce on the piece of paper it was spicy hot like a red pepper.

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  8. siennah12

    My sleepover by sienna . On the first week of the school holidays I had a sleepover. I brought my toy cat. Named my toy cat Prinses purry. She is purple and not that fluffy. Me and Bayley played a cool game. Oliver had to try to get me when I ran out of Bailey`s bedroom. When I ran out of Bailey`s

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  9. lukasc123

    My Baby Brother’s Birthday by Lukas Chapman

    In the holidays it was my baby brothers b-day. Heaps of my baby brothers friends came over. I know some of their names – Logan,Bentley and someone else. For our food we had lollies, sausage rolls, pies, chips, juicy lollies, and sandwiches. The sandwiches were ham, cheese and mayo and the other ones where marmite and cheese. When I went to play with a toy a baby came over and said “whaaaaaaaaaaaaaa” because he wanted to play with it, so I gave it to the baby and I got another toy and then the same baby came over and said “whaaaaaaaaaaa” because he wanted my toy again! That baby kept doing the same thing over and over so I didn’t play with a toy for an hour. At the end of that we had the cake and it was chocolate cake with chocolate icing on the top. Down the bottom there were crunchies smashed up and some little decorations which were two things with wheels on it. Guess what they were? They were a loader and tractor with a trailer on it. Then everyone went home.

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  10. loganj123

    My Cousin Staying the Night by Logan James

    My cousin stayed at my house. I had fish in chips. Brooklyn, Locke and I had ice cream. Locke had ice cream in a normal ice cream cone. Brooklyn and I had a waffle cone. We got more than Locke. We slept in the lounge. My brother Jonah slept in the lounge too. In the morning we woke up and watched T.V. After lunch we played on the playstation.

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  11. jamaynem

    Jamayne’s Beach Story by Jamayne Martin

    I went to the beach and I made a sandcastle and I went for a swim. I got pushed over from a wave. After that I got Subway.

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  12. asims1 (Post author)

    My Cousin by Leanne Peti

    I was helping my cousin at his house and I was helping my cousin colour in.

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  13. sapphireh1

    Poppies by Sapphire Heemi-Awheto

    Yesterday room seven went to Miss Colls’ class and we made poppies with room six. It was fun because room seven and six finger knitted but I did not know how to finger knit. No one taught me how to finger knit but we were running out of time anyway and we packed up for the day.

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  14. amberr123

    At Nana’s House by Amber Romain

    I went to my nana’s house and I had a sleepover. I woke up at five o,clock. I hopped into the car and drove to the farm to see the cow get milked. There were more than 100. The cows went back into the paddock and the man was cleaning up when we got back. We had bacon and eggs. I had pasta for dinner we had sausages and pasta. It was delicious. The next day I played on my mums computer I went to bed and I dreamt about unicorns.

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  15. jaydenl

    My Holiday at the Hospital by Jayden Lindsey

    In the holidays I went to the hospital in Waikato. It was fun. I went to the hospital because I had a giant lump on my neck.

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  16. lilym1234

    Abi’s House by Lily McGreevy

    In the second week of the holidays I wanted to go to my friends, Abi, Caitlin and Timmy’s house. I was excited because I do not get to spend much time with them. They have a very very long driveway! When I got up to the gate Abi’s puppy dog came down the driveway and barked. They were looking after another puppy dog that was doing the same thing except she was running slower. Their puppy dog’s name is Alfie and he is a boy and the one that they were looking after is called Meir who is a girl. I was a little afraid for a little while but then mum reminded me that I wasn’t afraid of Alfie. Meir was a tinsy bit younger so she was a little bit calmer. So, I ran to my friend Abi and ran out of the gate to Abi’s house. Then we both walked up the two story building – her house. We went inside and they showed me around. Me, Abi, Caitlin and Timmy went into the playroom that I never knew was there because when I was there last, it was Timmy’s room. In there we all played loom bands but Timmy did not play very much. We went outside and Abi showed me some chrysalis and at the end of the show (Abi and Caitlin called it a show) they showed me two caterpillars and then Abi and I saw something squiggling in the dirt. It was black and yellow. Guess what it was!? It was another caterpillar. One was called Lily or it was spelt Lilly. I don’t know!? We had lots of fun.
    The End.

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  17. johnstonc

    Hunting in the Holidays by Johnston Coll

    In the holidays we went to poppas and we went hunting. We caught two pigs and one stag but it got back up and ran away. I got to carry the first pig and then we saw another one so uncle Kenny chased it up the hill but … he couldn’t catch. Bart (poppa’s dog) came and caught it. Then we shot another stag and this time it didn’t get up and run away.

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  18. charmainei

    Holidays at Nans house by Charmaine Iripa.

    On Monday my family and I were heading home because we went to my Nan’s house. My family and I left at midday because my Mum said she didn’t want to drive in heat or cold. For lunch we had chicken, potato salad, salad, water and white fizzy and then we left to go and open my presents but it turned dark. After that we got home and then we went to sleep. In the morning I opened my presents and I got a bike and a Barbie book and crayons to colour with.

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  19. tipenem

    Tipene’s trip to the movies by Tipene

    On holiday I went to my cousin Kerian’s house. I had a sleep over. Then we went to the movies in Tauranga. We watched the movie called ‘Home.’

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  20. Lukas Chapman

    Two Cool Boys by Lukas Chapman 25.5.15

    Once upon a time there lived two cool boys called Lukas Chapman and Ninja Jayden. Lukas was the fastest person in the world. Jayden was the strongest person in the world. They both lived in the same house, it was massive. They could build anything they liked. Lukas and Jayden were famous, they didn’t just stay home they did go to school. Lukas was the fastest kid out of his school and Jayden was the strongest kid out of their school. One day Lukas and Jayden were walking home and they saw a gang beating up a little kid and they walked over and saved the little kid by saying “don’t do that!”. The evil gang ran off scared. The little kid lived happily ever after. The end.

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  21. Keith

    Two Tough Guys by Keith Ainsley

    Once upon a time Peter Pan and Mr Smeas had a humongous fight to see who was stronger. Peter Pan won the fight because Peter Pan cheated by flying on the roof. He ran out of pixy dust so he fell to the ground. As he fell they both donked heads. By the time Peter Pan got up he had a bump on his forehead. They both had sore heads. In the end Peter Pan and Mr Smeas died because they got tangled up by Captain Hook’s pointy hand. They didn’t live happily ever after!

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  22. Johnston coll

    25.5.15
    Bulldog and His Mum by Johnston Coll

    Once upon a time there was a little boy named Bulldog and his mum. They lived in a magical house far far away. The boy had super speed and ice, his mum had strength. One day Bulldog’s mum got locked in the super market and her strength couldn’t open it. Oh no! So they made a plan, the boy iced the door and then his mum kicked it open and they all lived happily ever after until… the big bad wolf came along with his army. Bulldog and his mum couldn’t stop them so they went to get help but… they couldn’t get help, so they stayed and fought. But they couldn’t take them, so they ran away. His mum wasn’t fast enough because she had strength and he had super speed, so Bulldog had to give his mum a piggyback ride. They ran to town but the army chased after them. When they got to town the army was taking over the town they couldn’t stop them. They went to get help and this time they got help. The whole entire town stopped the army taking over the town and the army ran away and the townsfolk lived happily ever after thanks to Bulldog and his mum.

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    1. Rachael Coll

      Wow, what great imaginations you all have. I’m pleased that Bulldog helped saved his mum!

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  23. breap

    Once upon a time 26.5.15 by Brea Peka

    Once upon a time there lived a little girl called Brea. She lived in the woods.
    The problem was the old Mr Fox was coming to eat the little girl. The little girl locked the doors to save herself. The old Mr Fox said to the little girl, “little girl, little girl, let me came in.” “No” said the little girl.

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  24. seant1234

    Once upon a time there was a ninja who could cut through anything with his hands he was also the fastest and strongest human in the world. He lived in an old mansion where he built all his inventions like his robo-dragon or robo-bat. He was the fastest and strongest human on the planet. Another one of his superpowers was lightning. He was walking along the road one day when suddenly… he saw a robo-bull that was about to eat spider pig, the ten little pigs and the five little rabbits, so he called his pet dragon and the dragon ate up the robo-bull and they lived happily ever after. The end!!

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  25. loganj123

    Logan and Lukas Ninjas by Logan James

    Once a upon a time there were two ninjas they were called Ninja Logan and Ninja Lukas.
    But a white ninja named Jayden was fighting Ninja Logan and Ninja Lukas. We won the fight but heaps more white ninjas came. We won again but I died. Ninja Lukas lived happily ever after but I didn’t.

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  26. amberr123

    Peter Pan and His Friends by Amber Romain

    Once upon time Peter Pan had lots of friends. He didn’t have a mum or dad or brother or sister. He lived all on his own. The little people lived in a giant house. There were massive rooms.

    Peter Pan’s friends names were Sarah, Lincoln and Arabella. Peter Pan wanted to move back home to Rarotonga but the little people wanted to live with him. So the little people followed him to Rarotonga by hoping on a plane. They all lived happily ever after and they spent lots of time swimming.

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  27. mapan1234

    Super Mapa and the Pokemon by Mapa Niuila.

    Once upon a time there was a man called Super Mapa. A kid was getting beaten up. But Super Mapa stopped him. There were 22 men and I had 22 Mapa’s. We were fighting for a long time, but the 22 Mapa’s won. After the battle there was a bumble bee Pokemon to fight too. I beat team rockets Pokemon by saying “come out Pikachu, Vinikin and Froggy!” They used their super power fireball to win the last fight.

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  28. jaydenl

    The big, smelly, old wolf.

    Once upon a time there was a big, smelly, old wolf. He lived in a cave. His power was speed. The wolf saw a guy beating up Lukas. The wolf stopped the guy. “Are you all right?” said the wolf. “Yes,” said Lukas. Then the wolf turned into a human.

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  29. Sapphire Heemi-Awheto

    A Magical Pony and a Bad Unicorn by Sapphire

    Once upon a time…there was a magical pony and a bad unicorn. They lived in the faraway forest. The magical pony and the bad unicorn were able to do magic with their horns. The bad unicorn kept asking for stuff so the magical pony scared him away. The bad unicorn went away forever, and the Pony lived happily ever after.

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  30. siennah12

    My Outer Space Adventure by Sienna Harris

    One day outer space grew smaller and smaller and smaller. “Oh no” said the crazy thing “oh no what?” said the monster. “If outer space grows smaller our friends grow small too.” That is terrible we better go and save them. They quickly saved all their friends just in time. Their friends were a cat, Shrek and a wolf. Suddenly, the space ship began to tremble. There was a big boom when the ship exploded. The rabbits were all right. All together they made up a song. The song is called ‘I am floating’. This is the song “floating, drifting through the stars in outer space here we are”. “Finally we’re here” they said, all together. “Ummmm where are we?” said Shrek. “We are at Colin’s motel and cafe” said the monster. “Why are we here?” said Shrek. “We are here to get some super glue to glue the rabbit ship together”. So they glued the ship together but … suddenly a magical thing happened! Outer space grew big again but it didn’t stop so everyday it grew a little bit bigger. They lived happily ever after. The end.

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  31. Sarah

    Snow White and the Dragon by Sarah

    Once upon a time there was a girl called Snow White. She lived in the forest with the 7 dwarfs.Then the fire breathing dragon comes and burns the 7 dwarfs house. Then the princess pricked her finger and falls asleep. Then the castle turned into ice. Then the fire breathing dragon got some sticks. He rubbed the sticks together and she woke up.

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  32. arabella

    A Beautiful Princess Called Snow White by Arabella

    Once upon a time… a beautiful princess called Snow White was born. She lived in a castle. She grew up as a beautiful princess. She had a talent, it was kindness. She lived with a evil witch that wanted to kill her. The princess heard them talking about killing her. She got a shock like a bow and arrow hit you and it hurts! She ran back down the stairs. She packed her bags and ran to the forest, she got scared like a wolf was chasing her. She was so scared she got hit it in the head by a rock. The queen found her, she carried her back to the castle. When the servants saw her they took Snow White to her room. She got better. One day she got kicked out! She found a house there was no one in it. She did some spring cleaning. She heard a knock at the door, it was some little people. They said that it was their house. They got mad but they got along in the end. The end.

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  33. Taikaha Manuel

    A little boy called Jack by Taikaha Manuel

    Once upon a time there was a little boy called Jack. He lived in a little house with a family cow. Every day his Mum told him to milk the cow for breakfast. Once a little girl asked for some milk, then she wandered off into another house. She went to a bakery. She kept asking for bread and stuff and she ate them. Then Jack got magic beans and planted them. He climbed up the plant and found three big coins and a goose. Then a giant tried to catch him, but instead he cut the plant and he fell. The giant died. Another giant tried to destroy the town. So jack and a bakery man climbed on a tree and broke a branch off the tree. They tied a bag full of rocks and threw them at the giant. They all lived happily ever after.

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  34. keitha123

    How to make a Manu Tukutuku
    By Keith

    Equipment
    Toetoe
    Reed
    Flax
    Glue

    Steps
    1 Use glue to put the three pieces of toetoe together
    2 Tie the flax to the toetoe to make the frame stronger.
    3 Lay the reed across the toetoe and glue.
    4 Glue the middle so it stays and tie it with flax.

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  35. johnstonc

    How to make a Manu Taratahi (Traditional Maori Kite for Children)
    By Johnston Coll – 22.6.15

    Equipment
    Toetoe
    Harakeke
    Raupo
    Glue

    Steps
    1 Put the toetoe in a kite shape and tie it with harakeke.
    2 Glue the raupo across the kite with a glue gun.
    3 Make a harakeke rope to tie it on the kite.

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  36. amberr123

    HOW TO MAKE A MANU TARATAHI
    By Amber

    EQUIPMENT
    flax
    toetoe
    glue
    raupo sticks

    STEPS
    1.Tie the toetoe stalks together to make an arrow shaped frame

    2. Glue the bits of rapo sticks to across the three toetoe sticks.

    3.Make long strips of flax

    4.Use the strips of flax to criss cross up the side of the frame

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  37. jamaynem

    How to make a Manu Tukutuku
    by Taikaha and Jamayne:7r

    EQUIPMENT:
    flax
    toetoe
    raupo
    glue
    STEPS:
    1.get 3 toetoe glue them together
    2.then glue the reeds on top
    3.next tie the reed on top of the toetoe
    4.then you use a strip of flax to criss cross up the frame
    5.your done

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  38. lincolnh

    22.6.15 By Lincoln
    How to make a Manu tukutuku

    Equipment
    Toetoe
    Flax
    Reed
    Hot glue gun

    Steps
    1.Put the toetoe in a kite shape and tie it with flax
    2.Glue the frame together
    3.Tie the reed across the kite with flax.
    4. Make a flax rope to tie it on the kite.

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  39. loganj123

    How to make a manu Tukutuku
    by logan

    Materials
    toetoe stalks
    raupo
    flax
    glue

    Steps
    1.Glue and tie the toetoe stalks together with flax
    2.Put glue on the flax to hold it
    3.Glue raupo across the frame
    4.Use flax string to criss cross up the frame

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  40. arabella

    How to make kites
    by ARABELLA GRACE COGHLAN.

    Equipment
    raupo sticks
    harakeke
    toetoe
    glue

    Steps
    1. Get the short and fat toetoe sticks .
    2. Put in place so it is shaped like an arrow.
    3. Glue the toetoe sticks together.
    4. Glue some skinny raupo sticks across the three toetoe sticks.
    5. Do criss cross on the sticks with green harakeke.

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  41. breap

    How to make a Manu Taratahi
    by Brea

    Equipment

    Glue
    flax/ harakeke
    toetoe
    Raupo

    Steps.

    1.Grab the toetoe and put them on the side of the kite and in the middle to make a triangle.

    2. Glue the toetoe sticks together.

    3. Next put the raupo along the top of the three toetoe sticks.

    4. Glue the raupo.

    5. Tie same flax string like a x.

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  42. Sean

    22.6.15

    How to make a Manu Tukutuku

    Equipment:

    Reed

    Toetoe

    Flax

    Hot glue

    Steps:

    1. Glue and tie the toetoe in a w shape.

    2. Cut the reed into different sizes.

    3. Glue the reed across the toetoe.

    4. Cross tie the reed onto the frame with flax strands.

    5. Test it!

    By Sean Todd

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  43. Sapphire Heemi-Awheto

    How to make a Manu tukutuku
    By Sapphire

    Equipment
    Glue
    flax/ harakeke
    Toetoe
    raupo sticks

    Steps
    1 Get three Toetoe sticks to make the frame.
    2 Glue the Toetoe frame together.
    3 Tie the frame with Harakeke to make it stronger .
    4 Glue the raupo sticks across the frame.
    5 Criss cross the harakeke across each join of the raupo sticks to the frame.

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  44. Sienna Harris

    How to make a manu taratahi.

    Equipment:
    toetoe
    raupo
    harakeke/ flax
    hot glue

    Steps:
    1. First find a hot glue gun.
    2. When you have found a hot glue gun make a frame with the toetoe.
    3. Make sure you don’t get glue on your self.
    4. Make sure it sticks together when you glue it.
    5. Strand some flax very, very thinly.
    6. When you have done that use it like a rope and wrap it around the frame.
    7. Cut some bits of raupo of all different sizes.
    8. Stick the bits of raupo to the frame with glue.
    9. Do some criss cross with some strand flax on each of the raupo.

    By Sienna Harris.

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  45. Sarah

    How to make a Manu tukutuku

    Equipment:
    Toetoe stems
    Flax
    Toetoe
    Glue
    Raupo Frames

    Steps:
    1. Put the toetoe at the sides and in the middle to make an arrow shape.
    2. Glue the toetoe and hold them together.
    3. Glue the raupo frames to the toetoe.
    4. Get a strip of flax and criss cross.
    By Sarah Harper

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